On Sun, 09 May 2010 19:37:35 +0200
"Paweł Hajdan, Jr." <phajdan.jr@gentoo.org> wrote:
> Pinging you then. By the way, I have opened a stabilization bug and
> we're getting some first Arch Testers' reports. It would be nice to get
> the GuideXML quite ready for the inclusion.
Actually, it looks pretty good. You musta cleaned it up. Only a couple of things left:
1. In CL 1.5, add parentheses around the RED comment text, just like you did in CL 1.4.
2. Just to make it more clear, change "${EDITOR}" in CL 1.6 to "nano -w" -- we generally use nano for basic editing examples. Experienced users will already be using a different tools, but inexperienced users might not know what ${EDITOR} is.
3. Maybe add <c> tags around each instance of logcheck where it is referred to as a program name. For the *user* "logcheck" you can leave it as-is. You might also want to enclose syslog-ng in <c> tags, too, before CL 1.3.
4. MOST IMPORTANT: do **not** do "echo app-admin/logcheck ~arch >> whatever"
- This is wrong! You NEVER add the ~arch keyword!! Just list app-admin/logcheck in package.keywords. This applies to any package in Portage.
- So CL 1.2 should be:
# <i>echo app-admin/logcheck >> /etc/portage/package.keywords</i>
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Open a GDP bug once logcheck is stabilized, and we can add the revised guide to /doc/en/