Robyn and others --
I made some very minor edits that are all around tightening up the text (for example, "join us in blah blah blah" as opposed to "join us and participate . . . ." and things like that), but otherwise the page is great. +1 to Robyn.
Larry
On Tue, Sep 28, 2010 at 7:36 AM, Larry Cafiero <larry.cafiero@gmail.com> wrote:
Best line:
'Fedora 14 / Beta is for Carotene / Let's Push for Final!'
Did you come up with that one, Robyn?
Larry Cafiero
On Tue, Sep 28, 2010 at 7:18 AM, Jared K. Smith <jsmith@fedoraproject.org> wrote:
On Tue, Sep 28, 2010 at 1:11 AM, Robyn Bergeron
<robyn.bergeron@gmail.com> wrote:
> I've written up the Beta announcement, attempting to breathe a little
> bit of life into it so it's not a carbon copy of the F13 announcement:
Yay!
> I would love some feedback and eyeballs ASAP, particularly around the
> features (especially Spice!) to make sure I haven't goofed anything
> up. If you want to polish, feel free to do that as well.
I took a look at it, and am very happy with the way it turned out.
> ALSO: I really, really need to figure out how / where to get / make
> the referral links.
Mike McGrath pointed me to
http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Link_tracking, which has all the
relevant data.
> (On that note, it'd be useful to know if we did anything as far as
> looking at the referral links we utilized last time around; if nobody
> is doing anything with that, we should figure out how to do something
> with it, at least figure out if we have procured any interesting
> information that way as far as where our traffic is coming from.)
Good point!
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