https://fedoraproject.org/w/index.php?title=Fedora_13_Talking_Points&diff=1559 23&oldid=155919

I updated the top couple of the talking points, to give an
illustration of how to write these. (Of course, you could also look
back at the F12 page too!) :-) I'm hoping that these can serve as a
sort of guide for how to explain a talking point.

The key is to explain the talking point to a lay audience who's not
familiar with the technology involved. The summary sentence should be
short and capture the spirit, momentum, and general appeal of the
talking point. It answers the question "Give me the one-sentence
elevator pitch for how this feature helps make Fedora awesome."

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On Thursday 25 February 2010 14:17:13 Paul W. Frields wrote:
> https://fedoraproject.org/w/index.php?title=Fedora_13_Talking_Points&diff=1
> 55923&oldid=155919

thanks Paul - i added content to the Spin-Section for the Security Spin - Can
someone please have a look if there is a typo?
https://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Fedora_13_Talking_Points#Security_Spin

thanks Joerg
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On 02/25/2010 07:25 PM, Joerg Simon wrote:
> On Thursday 25 February 2010 14:17:13 Paul W. Frields wrote:
>> https://fedoraproject.org/w/index.php?title=Fedora_13_Talking_Points&diff=1
>> 55923&oldid=155919
>
> thanks Paul - i added content to the Spin-Section for the Security Spin - Can
> someone please have a look if there is a typo?
> https://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Fedora_13_Talking_Points#Security_Spin
>
> thanks Joerg
>
Joerg,

Made a few changes. Let me know if its right and if you want to add any
more points about it.

- - Hiemanshu
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On Thu, Feb 25, 2010 at 07:49:15PM +0530, Hiemanshu Sharma wrote:
> On 02/25/2010 07:25 PM, Joerg Simon wrote:
> > On Thursday 25 February 2010 14:17:13 Paul W. Frields wrote:
> >> https://fedoraproject.org/w/index.php?title=Fedora_13_Talking_Points&diff=1
> >> 55923&oldid=155919
> >
> > thanks Paul - i added content to the Spin-Section for the Security Spin - Can
> > someone please have a look if there is a typo?
> > https://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Fedora_13_Talking_Points#Security_Spin
> >
> > thanks Joerg
> >
> Joerg,
>
> Made a few changes. Let me know if its right and if you want to add any
> more points about it.

I did a little trivial editing for style -- looking good!

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On Thursday 25 February 2010 15:37:07 Paul W. Frields wrote:
> On Thu, Feb 25, 2010 at 07:49:15PM +0530, Hiemanshu Sharma wrote:
> > Made a few changes. Let me know if its right and if you want to add any
> > more points about it.
>
> I did a little trivial editing for style -- looking good!

Hiemanshu, Paul - thanks!!!
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