Alexander it looks really nice, for me the 17 can stay there, the
position makes it really glowing and a part of the firework.
About the beefy, I agree with Elad, Tatica and T2hot it should be
better not there. Mizmo has also that opinion.
btw greetings from LibreGraphicsMeeting in Vienna, we all will
hopefully com safely back home and can talk about next week more
2012/5/5, Onyeibo Oku <email@example.com>:
> On Sat, 2012-05-05 at 16:05 +0400, Alexander Smirnov wrote:
>> Hi team!
>> I uploaded to my fedorapeople space  Fedora 17 base sleeves concept
>> (Hotdog presents Fedora 17
>>  -
> Awesome as always.
> My Comments:
> 1. Moving the glowing '17' as suggested by Tatica would be great but I
> get the drift here. That option will make it look more formal and
> serious but I guess Alex wants to communicate excitement and fun (as per
> the fireworks). So I would suggest a varying intensity of glow on the
> '17' to give the impression that the fireworks is producing the '17'.
> If that's not possible ... Leave it there anyway. Its less formal and
> this release has a 'fun' undertone to it. (OR we vote)
> 2. The beefy looks a bit too 'cartoony' -- I would rather use outlines
> with transparencies to represent that (something like the '17' but more
> subtle in presentation). Black arm, and brown sandwiching ... those
> colours don't combine well with a heavy blue theme.
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