system-lock-screen draft

New draft of system-lock-screen based on computer icon. Comments welcome.

Luya

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New draft of system-lock-screen based on computer icon. Comments welcome.

Luya

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On Tue, 2008-06-24 at 15:44 -0700, Luya Tshimbalanga wrote:
> New draft of system-lock-screen based on computer icon. Comments welcome.
>
> Luya
>
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Not bad, here are few comments:
* 16x16 version seems to have not very well defined shape, perhaps will
need further simplification
* 22x22 (and 24x24) version should use flat perspective instead of
on-the-table
* 32x32 is rendered in 16x16, I cannot say, if it's 32x32 or 16x16 one
by looking at the png
* 48x48 - the top line is a little blurry, you can easily make it sharp
if you create the perspective by following the on the table perspective
how-to [1] (err... I just noticed it's probably because the lines are
not perfectly vertical/horizontal. Seems like you took the isometric
monitor and only deformed it in inkscape... Would be better to copy over
only the content of the display [wallpaper] and redraw the rest from
scratch)
* the shadow in on-the-table and flat perspective icons should be only
bellow the icon, unlike in the isometric one
* is there any particular reason for the lock to be plain white?
* it would also help to create more contrast between the top and front
faces of the display

Martin

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Martin Sourada a écrit :
> * 16x16 version seems to have not very well defined shape, perhaps will
> need further simplification
>
It should be fixed.
> * 22x22 (and 24x24) version should use flat perspective instead of
> on-the-table
>
Fixed.
> * 32x32 is rendered in 16x16, I cannot say, if it's 32x32 or 16x16 one
> by looking at the png
>
My bad, I accidently overwrote 32x32 version. It should be the right
version.
> * 48x48 - the top line is a little blurry, you can easily make it sharp
> if you create the perspective by following the on the table perspective
> how-to [1] (err... I just noticed it's probably because the lines are
> not perfectly vertical/horizontal. Seems like you took the isometric
> monitor and only deformed it in inkscape... Would be better to copy over
> only the content of the display [wallpaper] and redraw the rest from
> scratch)
>
With some precision, I managed to align the monitor.
> * the shadow in on-the-table and flat perspective icons should be only
> bellow the icon, unlike in the isometric one
>
Fixed.
> * is there any particular reason for the lock to be plain white?
>
Readability. I made the lock semi-transparent though.

Luya

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On Tue, 2008-06-24 at 23:40 -0700, Luya Tshimbalanga wrote:
<snip>
> Readability. I made the lock semi-transparent though.
>
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Looking good, though it still needs some fixes to the grid alignment.
Try to play with it a little more, from quick look most of it would
probably only needs some translation on the canvas in x/y directions.
Plus the 22x22 png/svg are different from the 24x24 (perhaps similar
mistake like for the 32x32 one in previous version?). Use the 24x24
design one, after you align it better to the pixel grid - there seems to
be problem only with the most top line and the most bottom line, at
least at first look.

Martin
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Martin Sourada a écrit :
> Looking good, though it still needs some fixes to the grid alignment.
> Try to play with it a little more, from quick look most of it would
> probably only needs some translation on the canvas in x/y directions.
> Plus the 22x22 png/svg are different from the 24x24 (perhaps similar
> mistake like for the 32x32 one in previous version?). Use the 24x24
> design one, after you align it better to the pixel grid - there seems to
> be problem only with the most top line and the most bottom line, at
> least at first look.
>
> Martin
>
Yeah, I uploaded the wrong version. Fixed now.

Luya

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I reworked 22x22 and 24x24 icons.

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On Thu, 2008-06-26 at 00:58 -0700, Luya Tshimbalanga wrote:
> I reworked 22x22 and 24x24 icons.
>
> Luya

Looking good and crisp. I have no further comments regarding these two
sizes :-)

Martin
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Martin Sourada a écrit :
> On Thu, 2008-06-26 at 00:58 -0700, Luya Tshimbalanga wrote:
>
>> I reworked 22x22 and 24x24 icons.
>>
>> Luya
>>
>
> Looking good and crisp. I have no further comments regarding these two
> sizes :-)
>
>
32x32 and 48x48 tweaked. Aligned top and bottom.

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On Thu, 2008-06-26 at 11:47 -0700, Luya Tshimbalanga wrote:
> Martin Sourada a écrit :
> > On Thu, 2008-06-26 at 00:58 -0700, Luya Tshimbalanga wrote:
> >
> >> I reworked 22x22 and 24x24 icons.
> >>
> >> Luya
> >>
> >
> > Looking good and crisp. I have no further comments regarding these two
> > sizes :-)
> >
> >
> 32x32 and 48x48 tweaked. Aligned top and bottom.
>
> Luya

Still needs to be aligned in x-direction. Otherwise it's looking fine.

Martin
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