On 6/19/11, Manuel Wolfshant <wolfy@nobugconsulting.ro> wrote:
> On 06/18/2011 10:47 PM, Cody Jackson wrote:
>> Section 6.3:
>> "Even as an inexperienced CentOS user we can use your help" sounds a
>> bit like the release team is comprised of inexperienced CentOS users.
>> It is, of course, not! Perhaps something like "Even as an
>> inexperienced CentOS user, you can help the CentOS project!" would
>> work better?
> uhm. I'll leave that to people with more English knowledge than me. It
> looks fine from where I stand.

I'd second Cody on this, coming across that paragraph on the page, it
makes CentOS devs the inexperienced users.
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On 23 June 2011 18:02, Emmanuel Noobadmin <centos.admin@gmail.com> wrote:
> On 6/19/11, Manuel Wolfshant <wolfy@nobugconsulting.ro> wrote:
>> On 06/18/2011 10:47 PM, Cody Jackson wrote:
>>> Section 6.3:
>>> "Even as an inexperienced CentOS user we can use your help" sounds a
>>> bit like the release team is comprised of inexperienced CentOS users.
>>> It is, of course, not! Perhaps something like "Even as an
>>> inexperienced CentOS user, you can help the CentOS project!" would
>>> work better?
>> uhm. I'll leave that to people with more English knowledge than me. It
>> looks fine from where I stand.
>
> I'd second Cody on this, coming across that paragraph on the page, it
> makes CentOS devs the inexperienced users.

Thank you for the comment. I have made a note to examine that section
and adjust it, appropriately, in due course.

(Can anyone lend me a 30 hour day, please?)

Alan.
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On 6/24/11, Alan Bartlett <ajb@elrepo.org> wrote:
> Thank you for the comment. I have made a note to examine that section
> and adjust it, appropriately, in due course.
>
> (Can anyone lend me a 30 hour day, please?)

Sorry, a request that you sent could not be delivered to one or more
of its recipients. This is a permanent error. The following
address(es) failed: godlyrequests@heaven

However, for what it's worth, I've created a wiki profile and would be
more than happy to help make that edit. That's assuming anybody dare
trust da noob admin with the wiki page... although I'm fairly certain
I won't be able to rm -rf the wiki
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On 06/23/2011 07:28 PM, Markus Falb wrote:
> On 18.6.2011 20:19, Manuel Wolfshant wrote:
>> Hello
>>
>> I've created the first version of the ReleaseNotes page for CentOS
>> 6.0 in the wiki. As usual, corrections / additions / translations are
>> welcome.
> I found one minor issue
>
> In section 2. Introduction
>
> Welcome to the CentOS 6.0 release. CentOS is an Enterprise-class Linux
> Distribution derived from sources freely provided to the public by our
> Upstream OS Provider (UOP)[1].
>
> The footnote [1] is missing.
Hello

thank you for notifying us. I fixed it

Manuel
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http://wiki.centos.org/Manuals/ReleaseNotes/CentOS6.0/BrazilianPortuguese?action="">


and we're done

On Thu, Jun 23, 2011 at 4:42 PM, Manuel Wolfshant <wolfy@nobugconsulting.ro> wrote:


On 06/23/2011 07:28 PM, Markus Falb wrote:

> On 18.6.2011 20:19, Manuel Wolfshant wrote:

>> Hello

>>

>> * * * I've created the first version of the ReleaseNotes page for CentOS

>> 6.0 in the wiki. As usual, corrections / additions / translations are

>> welcome.

> I found one minor issue

>

> In section 2. Introduction

>

> Welcome to the CentOS 6.0 release. CentOS is an Enterprise-class Linux

> Distribution derived from sources freely provided to the public by our

> Upstream OS Provider (UOP)[1].

>

> The footnote [1] is missing.

Hello



* * thank you for notifying us. I fixed it



* * Manuel

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